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Or maybe it's just his pants he is holding....
I like the way you drew the hair as well, but I think his head might be slightly too long. The face expression is lovely, but if I had to point out something you could work on, it's the head shape mostly and the face. You might also want to make his ear bigger. Also, Iruka's left arm is a little awkward. I think it's his shoulder that's a little too big. Last thing I have to say is that his scar is probably a bit too wide. But otherwise, it's lovely and definitely one of the best Iruka art pieces I've seen in a long time
- And don't' get frightened because of the criticism. I'm one of those who can only criticize a picture when it's really well draw (don't ask why. Either it's because I'm too lazy to criticize someone who has a looong way to go or else it's because I just don't know where to start or something?). Which means you should be proud of yourself xD Straight to my favorites ;D
I don't think it's because it's bowed or the ponytails fault. If you try to "remove" the ponytail with your finger, you can see just how pointy his head is. But it's not a big deal and I guess you can excuse with the old "people are all different" excuse xD haha..